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继续微笑 發表於 2007-8-31 07:49:31

<P>欢迎楚兄，我专门登录咗你嘅网址，楚兄真係多才多艺，我最钟意仲係听你讲古仔。</P>
<P>希望楚兄多发一啲原创上嚟，俾我哋欣赏下。</P>

楚申读 發表於 2007-8-30 07:48:57

新人报到来首自己填词的——大旗英雄传主题歌

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卢总 發表於 2007-8-30 09:22:37

基于软硬件问题，暂时听唔到住，不过支持鼓励下你先！

UngooChan 發表於 2007-8-30 20:53:25

<P>久仰楚兄大名，自己為自己講嘅古仔寫詞，效果係最好嘅，因爲深知故事內容。呢首歌旋律原曲嚟自邊度？如果有朋友要唱，都需要先得到純伴奏音樂。</P>
<P>歡迎以後經常嚟同知音交流詞作及填詞技巧。</P>

楚申读 發表於 2007-8-31 04:08:08

哈哈，兄台肯定在渔人或绿城玩过，我最近又改编了首新歌，粤曲岩我唱，但流行歌完全吾店，这首是小虎队的＜庸人自扰＞

samkong 發表於 2007-9-4 07:13:07

歡迎新朋友楚兄！你寫嘅詞，小弟一字一句噉認真拜讀；呢首歌曲，小弟細心聆聽多遍。聽畢，頓覺楚兄創作功力之深厚，無論從符合音律平仄押韻量度，用詞遣句之鋪設角度，抑或核心主題之表達及句段之間嘅連貫性，皆為賞心悅目，共鳴甚深！絕非泛泛之輩得以為之。楚兄之大作正好道明，論壇乃藏龍臥虎之地，精品層出不窮，可喜可賀也！<BR>期待你嘅新作品陸續有來！

小昭 發表於 2007-9-4 23:04:44

不错！歌词写得挺有意思。

楚申读 發表於 2007-9-5 04:53:35

<P><FONT face=Verdana><FONT color=#000000>samkong兄你也是填词高手，你的作品也在《難忘您的音韵》CD里也拜读过。兄台果然听得仔细，</FONT></FONT><FONT face=Verdana>这首歌第一段写友情，第二段写爱情，然后是是歌的高潮部分，最后＂成败里充满乐趣　无论错与对　一切统统去　随浪花消散在风里＂为核心表达内容，其实这是我最近填的词，以往填写自己的内心世界、情情塔塔既居多，一般很少填这类词，但当时想讲这个古仔，看了古龙先生的《大旗英雄传》后，被书中人物内容感动，才有冲动填得下来。现在我主攻讲古，希望迟D可以在某电台听到我讲古既声音。</FONT></P>

highyun 發表於 2007-9-5 06:28:38

楚兄啲古有冇Sample共享上嚟畀粵協嘅衆多古迷聽下啊？

samkong 發表於 2007-9-5 07:21:26

原來楚兄如此多才藝，呢首咁靚、主題思想咁鮮明嘅歌詞，“成敗裡充滿樂趣　無論錯與對　一切統統去　隨浪花消散在風裡”，個感覺就頗有武俠小說中嘅主人公嗰種俠骨柔腸嘅瀟灑氣度，睇落個故事情節亦必定係引人入勝，精彩紛呈，如果能夠聽到楚兄對故事之精辟演繹，我諗一定好正！十分期待，到時一定要擔定凳仔，霸番個頭位嚟聽楚兄講故仔先得，哈哈。
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斯巴滔 發表於 2007-9-5 20:47:37

几时有得听楼主讲故事啊？

bobobian 發表於 2007-9-9 15:27:41

拜读了。。。

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