【七律】偶感 粵語版／古典版
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 24pt; TEXT-INDENT: -24pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 24.0pt;"><span class="postbody1"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="3">平日得閒都會寫下格律詩，有次用粵語和人地詩，之後又補充個古典版：</font></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 24pt; TEXT-INDENT: -24pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 24.0pt;"><span class="postbody1"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="3"></font></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 24pt; TEXT-INDENT: -24pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 24.0pt;"><span class="postbody1"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="3"></font></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 24pt; TEXT-INDENT: -24pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 24.0pt;"><span class="postbody1"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="3"></font></span></b></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 24pt; TEXT-INDENT: -24pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 24.0pt;"><span class="postbody1"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="3">粵語版</font></span></b></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 24pt; TEXT-INDENT: -24pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 24.0pt;"><span class="postbody1"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"></span></b></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="3">世事通通一舊雲，紅塵點解咁沙塵？</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 24pt; TEXT-INDENT: -24pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 24.0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="3">幾行歸雁唔知路，半夜寒風搞乜春？</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 24pt; TEXT-INDENT: -24pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 24.0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="3">流水浮聲落腳遠，黃鶯報夢唱支新。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 24pt; TEXT-INDENT: -24pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 24.0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"></span><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">不如唔諗呢啲野，望下聽朝起到身。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p></p><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">古典版</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">世事紛紛似密雲，紅塵何苦惹<span class="postbody1">車</span>塵？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">幾行歸雁難尋路，半夜寒風憶否春？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">流水浮聲入世遠，黃鶯壓夢唱歌新。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">而今忘卻千般念，任我塵寰過客身。 </span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">2006.11.13</span>[此帖子已經被作者於2007-2-15 0:33:56編輯過]
都係鍾意古典版多啲。 粵語寫嘢係比較輕鬆詼諧，寫吓打油詩都重可以，但你呢個話題比較嚴肅，用粵語寫感覺唔係咁合拍~ <p>好好</p><p>好好</p><p>好好</p><p>好好</p> <div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>highyun</i>在2007-2-15 11:08:44的發言：</b><br/>都係鍾意古典版多啲。</div><p>多謝欣賞！ </p> <div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>羊城惜花人</i>在2007-2-15 15:42:37的發言：</b><br/>粵語寫嘢係比較輕鬆詼諧，寫吓打油詩都重可以，但你呢個話題比較嚴肅，用粵語寫感覺唔係咁合拍~</div><p>王亭之先生有云「廣府文人有一種文體，稱為『三及第』，此即文言、白話、方言齊用......」。 </p><p>早排寫古典詩寫得多，咪試下寫下粵語版，但又唔想學前人咁太打油。所以，呢首唔太放。 </p><p>多謝指教！ </p>
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