代续嘅《一隻鷄仔嘅故仔》
<P>见到<STRONG>思覺失調</STRONG>咁主动代人哋续埋个故事落去，积极同原创嘅精神好值得我哋学习同鼓励！</P><P> </P>
<P><FONT color=darkorchid>嚟錄口供嘅阿sir叫馬SIR.呢位馬SIR做嘢嘅態度真係好麻麻.<BR>佢幫鴨仔錄口供嗰時成日都漫不經心噉.成日都諗住嗱嗱聲搞掂單嘢,唔好煩住晒~.<BR>突然間,佢見到靚雀孔雀行過嚟又想錄口供.<BR>馬SIR即刻扮晒正經咁,笑騎騎咁問孔雀啲細節問題..雞仔幾時唔見咗啊 之類.<BR>孔雀梗係好認真噉答佢喇,佢錄完口供,做完嘢,要走嘞.<BR>但係佢又想見多孔雀幾面喎.所以佢决定全力幫孔雀呢個忙.<BR>噉樣除咗可以見多孔雀幾麵之外,重可以令孔雀對佢産生好感呀嘛~<BR>於是符,佢搵咗另一位破案好叻嘅阿SIR---老鼠頭嚟視察環境,搜集證據,睇吓有咩嘢綫索...~<BR>馬SIR自己叫老鼠頭去耖吓有冇料到,自己就掛住喺度媾孔雀..<BR>呢個老鼠頭好醒目嘅,就連啲"窿窿旯旯"佢都可以耖得一清二楚.<BR>卒之,佢喺雞仔個竇度發現咗幾片蛇鱗!<BR>佢突然間醒起,佢個"老死"---蟒蛇都係住呢度架噃!<BR>唔通呢件事同蟒蛇有關~?<BR>老鼠頭决定將啲蛇鱗自己收埋先,噉樣就可以幫蟒蛇洗脫罪名喇!<BR>由于老鼠頭係做緊虧心事,所以諗住鬼鬼祟祟噉樣行出間房,然後就話畀馬SIR知佢乜都搵唔到!<BR>點知,佢鬼祟得滯,又或者係雞仔顯靈.老鼠頭臨出門口僕咗喺度.<BR>鴨仔見佢僕街,好心過去扶一扶佢.<BR>好衰唔衰,老鼠頭啱先袋住啲蛇磷跌咗片出嚟,拮親鴨仔隻腳.<BR>鴨仔feel到痛,但係又唔好意思叫出聲.因爲鴨仔好識大體嘅.有客喺度,費事失禮.<BR>阿老鼠頭就噉攞咗啲證據走咗.<BR>鴨仔見客人走咗喇,即刻反轉個脚板底嚟睇吓究竟係乜嘢"摻"親佢.<BR>竟然發現係一片蛇磷!鴨仔發覺事有蹺蹊...</FONT></P>
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<P> </P> <P><FONT color=darkorchid>嚟錄口供嘅阿sir叫馬SIR.呢位馬SIR做嘢嘅態度真係好麻麻.<BR>佢幫鴨仔錄口供嗰時成日都漫不經心噉.成日都諗住嗱嗱聲搞掂單嘢,唔好煩住晒~.<BR>突然間,佢見到靚雀孔雀行過嚟又想錄口供.<BR>馬SIR即刻扮晒正經<STRONG><FONT color=red>噉</FONT></STRONG>,笑騎騎<FONT color=#ff0000><STRONG>噉</STRONG></FONT>問孔雀啲細節問題..雞仔幾時唔見咗啊 之類.<BR>孔雀梗係好認真噉答佢<STRONG><FONT color=red>啦</FONT></STRONG>,佢錄完口供,做完嘢,要走嘞.<BR>但係佢又想見多孔雀幾面喎.所以佢决定全力幫孔雀呢個忙.<BR>噉樣除咗可以見多孔雀幾<STRONG><FONT color=red>面</FONT></STRONG>之外,重可以令孔雀對佢産生好感<STRONG><FONT color=red>吖</FONT></STRONG>嘛~<STRONG><U><FONT color=blue>［「麵」系用麦粉做嘅食物，唔系人嘅头颅前部。］</FONT></U></STRONG><BR>於是<STRONG><FONT color=red>乎</FONT></STRONG>,佢搵咗另一位破案好叻嘅阿SIR---老鼠頭嚟視察環境,搜集證據,睇吓有咩嘢綫索...~<BR>馬SIR自己叫老鼠頭去<STRONG><FONT color=red>摷</FONT></STRONG>吓有冇料到,自己就掛住喺度媾孔雀..<BR>呢個老鼠頭好醒目嘅,就連啲"<STRONG><FONT color=magenta>竉竉</FONT><FONT color=red>罅罅</FONT></STRONG>"佢都可以<FONT color=#ff0000><STRONG>摷</STRONG></FONT>得一清二楚.<STRONG><U><FONT color=blue>［个「窿」字好似应该系个「竉」字，查下《最紧要正字》就知嘞。］</FONT></U></STRONG><BR>卒之,佢喺雞仔個竇度發現咗幾片蛇鱗!<BR>佢突然間醒起,佢個"老死"---蟒蛇都係住呢度架噃!<BR>唔通呢件事同蟒蛇有關~?<BR>老鼠頭决定將啲蛇鱗自己收埋先,噉樣就可以幫蟒蛇洗脫罪名<FONT color=red><STRONG>嘞</STRONG></FONT>!<BR>由于老鼠頭係做緊虧心事,所以諗住鬼鬼祟祟噉樣行出間房,然後就話畀馬SIR知佢乜都搵唔到!<BR>點知,佢鬼祟得滯,又或者係雞仔顯靈.老鼠頭臨出門口僕咗喺度.<BR>鴨仔見佢僕街,好心過去扶一扶佢.<BR>好衰唔衰,老鼠頭啱先袋住啲蛇<STRONG><FONT color=red>鱗</FONT></STRONG>跌咗片出嚟,拮親鴨仔隻腳.<BR>鴨仔feel到痛,但係又唔好意思叫出聲.因爲鴨仔好識大體嘅.有客喺度,費事失禮.<BR>阿老鼠頭就噉攞咗啲證據走咗.<BR>鴨仔見客人走咗<STRONG><FONT color=red>嘞</FONT></STRONG>,即刻反轉個脚板底嚟睇吓究竟係乜嘢"<FONT color=magenta><STRONG>碜</STRONG></FONT>"親佢.<BR>竟然發現係一片蛇<FONT color=#ff0000><STRONG>鱗</STRONG></FONT>!鴨仔發覺事有蹺蹊...</FONT></P> <P>原帖由 <I>卢总</I> 於 2008-5-4 12:42 發表 <A href="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=78605&ptid=10049" target=_blank><IMG onclick=zoom(this) alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/common/back.gif" onload="attachimg(this, 'load')" border=0></A> 嚟錄口供嘅阿sir叫馬SIR.呢位馬SIR做嘢嘅態度真係好麻麻.佢幫鴨仔錄口供嗰時成日都漫不經心噉.成日都諗住嗱嗱聲搞掂單嘢,唔好煩住晒~.突然間,佢見到靚雀孔雀行過嚟又想錄口供.馬SIR即刻扮晒正經噉,笑騎騎噉問孔雀啲 ... </P>
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<P>窿冇錯~~</P>
<P><STRONG><FONT color=#ff00ff>碜 </FONT><FONT color=black>字</FONT><FONT color=black>都係錯<IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/lol.gif" border=0 smilieid="12"> </FONT></STRONG></P> <P>「窿」字肯定系错嘅——呢一点系无庸置疑嘅！唔信可以自己去查下！</P>
<P>「碜」字由于系<FONT color=magenta>玫瑰红色</FONT>，唔系<FONT color=red>大红</FONT>，兼且又加咗双引号，即使系错都错唔晒！<IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/titter.gif" border=0 smilieid="9"> <IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/lol.gif" border=0 smilieid="12"> <IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/tongue.gif" border=0 smilieid="7"> </P> 故仔定系古仔？ 吖！系噃！当初我就想话正埋个「故」字嘅，点知唔鬼记得咗！ <FONT color=#9932cc>
<P><FONT color=black>人哋系专登写成</FONT><FONT color=#9932cc size=5>麵</FONT><FONT color=#000000>咖！<IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/titter.gif" border=0 smilieid="9"> </FONT></P></FONT>
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<P><FONT color=#9932cc>噉樣除咗可以見多孔雀幾麵之外</FONT>——唔系想食妳啲<FONT color=#9932cc>麵</FONT>，系想见多妳几面。<IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/titter.gif" border=0 smilieid="9"></P> <P>嘩..錯字連篇...</P>
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<P>辛苦晒.thx.</P> <P>唔使客气！一早就话咗会做啲令你觉得「更加之劲无奈嘅嘢」咖啦！<IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/titter.gif" border=0 smilieid="9"> </P>
<P>不过可惜，我揾唔到自己喺边张帖同你噉讲过！<IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/mad.gif" border=0 smilieid="11"> </P> <P>跟住呢？有冇续落去</P> <P>卢总果然系一丝不苟啊 <IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/handshake.gif" border=0 smilieid="17"> 好嘢!</P>
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<P> </P> 乜笑ke4ke4係用騎咩？我記得最緊要正字入邊話原字唔係呢個喔
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