我又一首填词作品《月下思》[新添加另一歌词版本]
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<P>添加同一首曲既另一个填词版本</P>
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<P>月下思（温情版本） </P>
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<P>唱：heidern </P>
<P>曲：郑伊健《虫儿飞》</P>
<P>词：heidern </P>
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<P>夜夜共你牵手醉</P>
<P>笑笑看晚星相聚</P>
<P>微风里 渔舟趣</P>
<P>做鸳鸯眷侣 </P>
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<P>静静伴你双双对</P>
<P>晚晚见你方安睡</P>
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<P>月光璀 问一句</P>
<P>望今宵永醉 </P>
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<P>愿情侣 永伴随</P>
<P>不再为爱淌下泪</P>
<P>徐徐风里</P>
<P>悠悠相醉</P>
<P>这夜灯影里</P>
<P>对望相依到千岁</P>
[ 本帖最後由 heidern 於 2008-1-19 23:54 編輯 ] 好嘢自然受歡迎！<BR>樓主寫嘅呢首情歌，寓情於景，言之有物，配合旋律之下，朗朗上口。歌詞仲有啲類似阿Sam首《等玉人》嘅味道添。<BR>期待你嘅作品繼續有來！<IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/handshake.gif" border=0 smilieid="17">
[ 本帖最後由 samkong 於 2008-1-14 19:01 編輯 ] <P>原帖由 <I>samkong</I> 於 2008-1-14 17:53 發表 <A href="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=71955&ptid=9515" target=_blank><IMG onclick=zoom(this) alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/common/back.gif" onload="attachimg(this, 'load')" border=0></A> 好嘢自然受歡迎！樓主寫嘅呢首情歌，寓情於景，言之有物，配合旋律之下，朗朗上口。歌詞仲有啲類似阿Sam首《等玉人》嘅味道添。期待你嘅作品繼續有來！ ... </P>
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<P>呵呵，过奖了，其实这首歌我填了两个版本，这个版本是悲情版本，还有一个温情版本</P> 虽然你话呢个系悲情版本，但我觉得你唱得唔够悲情啊！ 「<SPAN class=style1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ˎ̥; mso-hansi-font-family: ˎ̥">月夜独舞飚飞絮</SPAN></SPAN>」，應該係「飈」定「飄」呢？ <P>原帖由 <I>highyun</I> 於 2008-1-14 23:33 發表 <A href="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=71984&ptid=9515" target=_blank><IMG onclick=zoom(this) alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/common/back.gif" onload="attachimg(this, 'load')" border=0></A> 「月夜独舞飚飞絮」，應該係「飈」定「飄」呢？ </P>
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<P>呵呵，对，确实是个「飘」字，不慎打错字，我已改正 <IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/tongue.gif" border=0 smilieid="7"> </P> 改得漂亮! 好正! 板主! 又有高手压阵啦<IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/lol.gif" border=0 smilieid="12"> 比好多香港嘅填词人还好。 <P>果然是水平很高的填词。</P> <P>好词，很有阿sam以前的作品feel！<IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.cantonese.asia/images/smilies/default/victory.gif" border=0 smilieid="14"> </P>
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