紫凤凰 發表於 2007-7-31 01:51:43

原創仿古詩——花市

<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">歲末寒冬春未至，</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p><FONT face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</FONT></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW">羊城已是萬花開</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW"><o:p><FONT face="Times New Roman">，</FONT></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW">清香陣陣驅吾冷，</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW"><o:p><FONT face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</FONT></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW">更使遊人接踵來。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW"></SPAN>&nbsp;</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW">本詩按照以下平仄基本格式：</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW"></SPAN>&nbsp;</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW">仄仄平平平仄仄</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW">平平仄仄仄平平</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW">平平仄仄平平仄</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW">仄仄平平仄仄平</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW"></SPAN>&nbsp;</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-TW style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW">（這是唐詩的基本格式之一）</SPAN></P>
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卢总 發表於 2007-7-31 03:06:06

<P>可惜！可惜！可惜啊！</P>

紫凤凰 發表於 2007-7-31 03:28:40

<P>可惜什麼？</P>

卢总 發表於 2007-7-31 04:01:53

可惜在你呢首诗唔押韵啰！

紫凤凰 發表於 2007-7-31 05:23:01

<P>你錯咗，答案係押嘅，你試下讀下邊爾首詩：</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">人生不相见， 动如参与商。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">今夕复何夕， 共此灯烛光。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">少壮能几时， 鬓发各已苍。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">访旧半为鬼， 惊呼热中肠。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">焉知二十载， 重上君子堂。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">昔别君未婚， 儿女忽成行。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">怡然敬父执， 问我来何方。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">问答乃未已， 驱儿罗酒浆。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">夜雨剪春韭， 新炊间黄粱。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">主称会面难， 一举累十觞。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">十觞亦不醉， 感子故意长。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 22.5pt 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">明日隔山岳， 世事两茫茫。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P>蒼、腸，蒼讀陰平，腸讀陽平，看似不同吧，可是都屬平聲，其韻腹、韻尾合，所以是合的，以上例子為杜甫的《贈衛八處士》</P>

紫凤凰 發表於 2007-7-31 05:41:10

<P><FONT size=4>我覺得盧總先要明白陰陽嘅主要作用。因乜事會分陰陽。</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>陰陽其實係應用於標記清濁嘅。轉啲維基百科上關於聲調嘅嘢（與陰陽有關）</FONT></P>
<P>汉语的<A title=声调 href="http://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%A3%B0%E8%B0%83&amp;variant=zh-cn">声调</A>，在漫长的历史时期中不断的分化组合。在学术界，通常以“平上去入”四声作为基本声调分类。在平上去入四类的基础上，加上阴，阳，上，下等形容词作为<A title=清濁音 href="http://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E6%B8%85%E6%BF%81%E9%9F%B3&amp;variant=zh-cn">清浊</A>的标记。例如“阴入”，“阳入”，意为“清入声”和“浊入声”。其他以此类推。</P>
<P><FONT size=4>明白否？</FONT></P>
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